Please post any comments for the Story I'm writing here...

So as to NOT have the story's flow interrupted I ask that any and all comments on it be posted here. I would also like to note that the 'Dragon" system I use was created by a friend and I was given full permission to use it in the story. Also another note. The character Oblivion is not my own but again, I have the permission of the owner to utilize the character's name and mannerisms in the story...and I have his collaboration to ensure a fairly accurate portrayal of said character.

Soo...I now officially open this Commentary... >.> just remember...no flaming Razz

Yours sincerely...the author...Lisa Renee...also known as Lavelia on this forum Razz

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